Why do you wish to treat me so?
As if you desire this pain I feel.
When everything around me seems unreal.
The one person who I thought would remain true,
left me to drown in a deep sea of blue.
And when I thought the waves would subside,
you just watched me as I cried.
Though I will never forget the pain I felt,
I must carry on with this hand I was dealt.An original by Kellie Dixon. Not for use by another person.
This poem means so much to me. It is silly, but I came up with this one in high school, as well. There was a couple really close to me who were fighting almost constantly. They were on the verge of breaking up.. actually they did kind of break up a lot. If nothing else, they fought quiet a bit, but in the end things worked out great for them. I loved this poem so much that I actually ended up painting it on my wall at my parent’s house. This poem conveys so much of my feelings at the time. I really hope anyone that reads this feels the deep, heartfelt emotion I poured into it.
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